短文改错重复性错误

改正在括号处标出,总共十处错误!I'vebeen(in)Chinafortwoyears.MyfriendsinEngland(sometimes)writetome,(asking)mehowlon

WangJunlikes(liked->likes)writingverymuch.Heoftensayshewantsto(be)agreatauthorinthefuture.Inordertom

Oneafternoon,whenIwereonmywayhome的were改was--1.Darkcloudsweregathered的gathered改gathering；--2过去进行时Ibeg

"But,"---"However,再答："Everything"---"Something"再答：第一行，everything改为something第二行，on去掉第二行，pay改为paid第三行，

knew---know

on-->atactively-->activemostofwhom-->mostofthemstudent's--->students'opinion-->opinionsexpressing-->

Somestudentssetdifferenthomeworkforstudentsduringthewinterholidaysaccordingtostudents'scores,andsome

1.asusual2.while-when3.hear-heard4.shocking-shocked5.ihadpushed中had去掉6.but-and7.carried-carry8.tohis

Mr.Joneswasveryangrywithhiswifeandshewasveryangrywithherhusband,too.Forafewdaystheydidn'tsay（speak）t

eginsatfiveo'clockgoeshomeSomepeopletakethebusandwalkseightmilesawayfromthreehourshasdinnergoestobed

much-manylisten-listeningwas-amit-themtiredstudying-tiredwithstudyingSometime-Sometimesdoesnotharmto

Walter'sgoaloflifewastobecomeasuccessfuldoctor.Heknewhehadtofinishhighschoolfirst,soheputhisheartint

It's--Itslike--likesalso---toorun---runscatseesthedog--dogseesthecatand---butlikes--likeeating---toe

Musicisoneofthearts.Itislikethespeakinglanguage,butituses【sound】.Whoinventedmusic?Who【sang】thefirsts

更正楼上答案如下,保证准确率!总共发现了十一处错误,估计有一处是楼主打错字了.DearSir,I'mwritingtobeoneofthehost(family改成families)forChines

TodayI'vegot(a去掉)wonderfulnewstotellyou.Ihave(加上been)offeredascholarshipatauniversityinAustraliaform

telling-tellstood-standstolivein-toliveit'sthebesutifulplace-it'sabesutifulplaceIis(its)economyhasbe

"Well,Dad,"saidtheson,"itisnotasgoodasitshouldbe,...Dad后的句号应为逗号.