作业帮寻求口语高手批改英语口语作文
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寻求口语高手批改英语口语作文
In my opinion,I think a real frieng is valuable and important.I must thankful them.Today I"ll give you one person of my feirnds in my life.Her name is X.When I was in my high school we met.At the first time,I did't like her because to her way of spaek and talking so much.Then after one thing changed my mind.It was during to my mobliephone was missing.That I couldn't know what to do.Because we were roommates.She was very helpful.She thought every ways for help me.Although the result was bad,in my heatt,she becamed my good friends.Then I knowed she was a easy-going girl.She was a 18 year-old girl who was slim and tall at that year.At the same time,she studied very hard.I found she had many goodness.After a series of many things ,we becamed the most intimate friend .We told each other every thing included our own secrets.I also remembered the thing when we were at school.We usually borrowed the books from school library.But the one time ,she was missed one book from the library.I felt that was a terrible thing,but she was very honest.She told the library worker about the thing and gave the money as the book's compensation.I thought the money was more vaule than the book's price.She was very optimistic.She felt it worth,meanwhile she thought it could make her comfortable.At the last,I also tuought so.I am very happy that I meet a girl who was so good.We can keep the friendship forever.这是一个英语口语描述一个自己的朋友.希望有好心的朋友帮我修改下这里面的问题.
In my opinion,I think a real frieng is valuable and important.I must thankful them.Today I"ll give you one person of my feirnds in my life.Her name is X.When I was in my high school we met.At the first time,I did't like her because to her way of spaek and talking so much.Then after one thing changed my mind.It was during to my mobliephone was missing.That I couldn't know what to do.Because we were roommates.She was very helpful.She thought every ways for help me.Although the result was bad,in my heatt,she becamed my good friends.Then I knowed she was a easy-going girl.She was a 18 year-old girl who was slim and tall at that year.At the same time,she studied very hard.I found she had many goodness.After a series of many things ,we becamed the most intimate friend .We told each other every thing included our own secrets.I also remembered the thing when we were at school.We usually borrowed the books from school library.But the one time ,she was missed one book from the library.I felt that was a terrible thing,but she was very honest.She told the library worker about the thing and gave the money as the book's compensation.I thought the money was more vaule than the book's price.She was very optimistic.She felt it worth,meanwhile she thought it could make her comfortable.At the last,I also tuought so.I am very happy that I meet a girl who was so good.We can keep the friendship forever.这是一个英语口语描述一个自己的朋友.希望有好心的朋友帮我修改下这里面的问题.
In my opinion,I think a trully friendship is valuable and important.All of us must be thankful to our friends.Today I"ll introduce one in my life.Her name is X.We got to know each other when we were at high school.At the beginning,I didn't like her for the way she talked and spoke.however one thing had changed my mind.She helped me to look for my mobile when I lost it,after that we became best friends.
后面你找老师改吧 这错误都是基本都是常识性的 你直接拿翻译器翻译的吧
后面你找老师改吧 这错误都是基本都是常识性的 你直接拿翻译器翻译的吧