作业帮大家帮我看一下这段英文语法上有什么问题吗?
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大家帮我看一下这段英文语法上有什么问题吗?
Mr.Sun,
Thank you very much for your reply and appreciation.I received your e-mail many days ago,and then I tried to call your Hong Kong cell phone and left messages twice but I didn’t get the reply until now.I wonder you’ve left Hong Kong again.what I shall do next is keep waiting.if you receive this e-mail,May you please tell me how I could contact you for more disccusion?
With best regards,
背景是我已经收到他的回邮,他让我打电话给他,但是我打了两次并且留下口讯他都没有回拨我的电话一直到现在,因此我再次发信给他.
Mr.Sun,
Thank you very much for your reply and appreciation.I received your e-mail many days ago,and then I tried to call your Hong Kong cell phone and left messages twice but I didn’t get the reply until now.I wonder you’ve left Hong Kong again.what I shall do next is keep waiting.if you receive this e-mail,May you please tell me how I could contact you for more disccusion?
With best regards,
背景是我已经收到他的回邮,他让我打电话给他,但是我打了两次并且留下口讯他都没有回拨我的电话一直到现在,因此我再次发信给他.
1.many days一般不这样说,用a few days
2.but I didn’t get the reply until now.but前应加个句号,不能这样连着说.而且后面应用完成时But I haven't got the replay until now.直到现在之前发生的事用完成时更准确.
3.I wonder you’ve left Hong Kong again.wonder后面应加if/whether,不加的话意思不准确.
4.what I shall do next is keep waiting.应是What shall I do next is keeping waiting.或What shall I do next is to keep waiting.首先前半句的语序不能用陈述句语序,因为它在句首.其次后面is后是表语,应用名词性词组或介词词组.
5.May 首字母应小写
就这些,总体来说还很标准,都是些小毛病了~
2.but I didn’t get the reply until now.but前应加个句号,不能这样连着说.而且后面应用完成时But I haven't got the replay until now.直到现在之前发生的事用完成时更准确.
3.I wonder you’ve left Hong Kong again.wonder后面应加if/whether,不加的话意思不准确.
4.what I shall do next is keep waiting.应是What shall I do next is keeping waiting.或What shall I do next is to keep waiting.首先前半句的语序不能用陈述句语序,因为它在句首.其次后面is后是表语,应用名词性词组或介词词组.
5.May 首字母应小写
就这些,总体来说还很标准,都是些小毛病了~