请教一下王老师关于这篇英语作文：1请指出错误,2估计可以得几分?谢谢

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答：I see that the picture shows us a bird mother who is in the nest looking at her flying children,it is obvious that the bird mother has focused all her energy on teaching her children how to fly and other experience.now,it seems that she is very happy to see her children having mastered how to fly.

I think it is the great mother who teachs them to get some useful skills.obviously,if it weren't for these love,they will not be able to fly.

So ,on no account can we forget our mother and her love,wherever we are in.

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下面是分数档

你好,同学,很高兴回答你的问题

正确答案：

整篇作文写得挺好的,就是字数少了一些,再充实一些就好了.

另外,有一句是虚拟语气,if it weren't for these love,they will not be able to fly.

是与将来事实相反的假设,主句应该用would/should 加动词原形,所以把will not最好改成would not

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再问：哦哦，其实老师要求就这些字了，50词。请问这篇短文估计能得几分呢？（评分标准在上面那图中）谢谢
再答： 13-15分吧

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