作业帮考研作文2011年英语（二）的作文：2008,、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图 （望高手批改）
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考研作文2011年英语（二）的作文：2008,、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图 （望高手批改）
【2011考研英语（二）大作文范文题目
write a short essay baesd on the following chart.in your writing,you should:
1)interpret the chart and
2)give your comments
you should write at least 150 wrods
write your essay on answer sheet 2(15points）】
作文：
From the information given in the above diagram, we can see a striking contrast in cars market among the domestic brand, Japanese brand and America brand from 2008 to 2009. During this period, there has been a obvious increase from 25% to 32% the home brand cars, while that of Japanese brand cars has been a dramatic decrease from 35% to 25%, America brand remain stable.
At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. On the one hand, in the wake of improvement qualify of life, the number of people wants own private car. As a result, they can consideration the terms of price, the home brand cars than abroad brand cars more preferential. On the other hand, most of the domestic corporation more lay emphasis on the technology of automobile. Therefore, this also is chiefly cause for people to select domestic brand.
In conclusion, we may predict that with speedy development of our society, the public need following increase with the private cars. Thus, the car of domestic brand made to rise competitive power, it is necessary that more attention technology improvement.
【2011考研英语（二）大作文范文题目
write a short essay baesd on the following chart.in your writing,you should:
1)interpret the chart and
2)give your comments
you should write at least 150 wrods
write your essay on answer sheet 2(15points）】
作文：
From the information given in the above diagram, we can see a striking contrast in cars market among the domestic brand, Japanese brand and America brand from 2008 to 2009. During this period, there has been a obvious increase from 25% to 32% the home brand cars, while that of Japanese brand cars has been a dramatic decrease from 35% to 25%, America brand remain stable.
At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. On the one hand, in the wake of improvement qualify of life, the number of people wants own private car. As a result, they can consideration the terms of price, the home brand cars than abroad brand cars more preferential. On the other hand, most of the domestic corporation more lay emphasis on the technology of automobile. Therefore, this also is chiefly cause for people to select domestic brand.
In conclusion, we may predict that with speedy development of our society, the public need following increase with the private cars. Thus, the car of domestic brand made to rise competitive power, it is necessary that more attention technology improvement.
说实话没有一句通顺,建议重写.
1.striking contrast?
2.Japanese Car Brands
3.do not use "phenomenon".
4.no comments?
5.So chinglish.
如果真的要找错误的话,我可能会找到至少30个.
1.striking contrast?
2.Japanese Car Brands
3.do not use "phenomenon".
4.no comments?
5.So chinglish.
如果真的要找错误的话,我可能会找到至少30个.