作业帮英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!
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英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!
hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation which is a kind of fruit?let me tell you ,that is guava,Today,I have come to a new environment ,tlthough not familar with the environment ,but fortunately,there and Ispend a year student so I don'tfeel strange.I choose to major is English,though my English not very good .but I will use my persistence and determination to conquer all this .students!let us strive fo life!这是电脑翻译的 我怕会有语法错误 到时候就丑死了!希望各位帮我各忙 使语句通顺 我读的没感情 不知道有没有哪个网站可以教我读这一段的 明天就要去学校了 到里面给我加几句也可以
hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation which is a kind of fruit?let me tell you ,that is guava,Today,I have come to a new environment ,tlthough not familar with the environment ,but fortunately,there and Ispend a year student so I don'tfeel strange.I choose to major is English,though my English not very good .but I will use my persistence and determination to conquer all this .students!let us strive fo life!这是电脑翻译的 我怕会有语法错误 到时候就丑死了!希望各位帮我各忙 使语句通顺 我读的没感情 不知道有没有哪个网站可以教我读这一段的 明天就要去学校了 到里面给我加几句也可以
不懂.为什麽英语不好还可以MAJOR IN ENG?
你这个就是典型的CHINGLISH啊.还有不要相信机译,害死你的……
-一般说I'M FROM XXX,如果你身处异乡可以说I CAME FROM XXX,如果在家乡说XXX IS MY HOMETOWN比较亲切.英语习惯地址顺序跟中国相反,所以中文说法湖南岳阳,英文就该说YUEYANG, HUNAN PROVINCE.
-还有不知道你要给中国人还是外国人演讲,如果对著中国人还好,对著外国人的话你那段" hear the name ... guava" 没有意思,因为他们不知道石榴中文怎麼说.而且你这段也处理的不好,CHINGLISH.
-接来下这一段“today ... dont feel strange" 看不懂,不知道你想说什麽.
-”I CHOOSE TO MAJOR IS ENG..." 两个动词了,你可以说“I CHOSE ENG AS MY MAJOR"
-"THOUGH MY ENG..." 读起来感觉怪怪的,不知道是不是正确,不过可以说”THOUGH IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT IT"
-别THOUGH完了又BUT,是错的.去掉BUT把后面的话接在“GOOD AT IT,” 后面还顺畅些.
这个……连想帮你改也不知道该如何下手,问题不少,可行不多.只能祝你好运了
你这个就是典型的CHINGLISH啊.还有不要相信机译,害死你的……
-一般说I'M FROM XXX,如果你身处异乡可以说I CAME FROM XXX,如果在家乡说XXX IS MY HOMETOWN比较亲切.英语习惯地址顺序跟中国相反,所以中文说法湖南岳阳,英文就该说YUEYANG, HUNAN PROVINCE.
-还有不知道你要给中国人还是外国人演讲,如果对著中国人还好,对著外国人的话你那段" hear the name ... guava" 没有意思,因为他们不知道石榴中文怎麼说.而且你这段也处理的不好,CHINGLISH.
-接来下这一段“today ... dont feel strange" 看不懂,不知道你想说什麽.
-”I CHOOSE TO MAJOR IS ENG..." 两个动词了,你可以说“I CHOSE ENG AS MY MAJOR"
-"THOUGH MY ENG..." 读起来感觉怪怪的,不知道是不是正确,不过可以说”THOUGH IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT IT"
-别THOUGH完了又BUT,是错的.去掉BUT把后面的话接在“GOOD AT IT,” 后面还顺畅些.
这个……连想帮你改也不知道该如何下手,问题不少,可行不多.只能祝你好运了