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以下短文共有十处错误,请给予改正.哪位帮帮忙?! half a year before i went abroad fo

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以下短文共有十处错误,请给予改正.哪位帮帮忙?! half a year before i went abroad for further study.i received a lot of present.All were wrapped in color papers.among them were two presents which were really interested me.my sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them.my brother gave me a note.which told."my present has been put in your bedroom."while i hurried into my bedroom.i found a box in it.open the box.i got a pocket computer.i was very gland.i understood these two presents would help me using body language to communicate people and improve my english
It was half a year before I went aboard for study. I received a lot of presents. All were wrapped in color papers. Among them were two presents which really interested me. My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and customs in different countries . My brother gave a note which said 'my present had been put in your bedroom.' when i hurried into my bedroom I found a box. I opened the box and it was a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understand these two presents would help me using body language to communicate and improve my english.