港大英语面试,我写了一篇自我介绍,有没有语法错误,还有什么不得体的地方请指出来.
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港大英语面试,我写了一篇自我介绍,有没有语法错误,还有什么不得体的地方请指出来.
我还有点感觉字数不太够……
Good morning,interviewer.I`m Wang Xin,from Jilin No.1 middle school.Aged at
17,I`ll be an adult 2 months later.
When it comes to my hobbies,they cover a wide range,among which
reading and swimming are my favorite.At present,being admitting into HK
University is my biggest dream ,which I`m sparing no effort to achieve.In my school,
I took part in the activities many times.So I have lots of practical
experience.
I
think I`ll be a good member of HK University.I hope you can give me a chance
to make my dream come true.
我还有点感觉字数不太够……
Good morning,interviewer.I`m Wang Xin,from Jilin No.1 middle school.Aged at
17,I`ll be an adult 2 months later.
When it comes to my hobbies,they cover a wide range,among which
reading and swimming are my favorite.At present,being admitting into HK
University is my biggest dream ,which I`m sparing no effort to achieve.In my school,
I took part in the activities many times.So I have lots of practical
experience.
I
think I`ll be a good member of HK University.I hope you can give me a chance
to make my dream come true.
interviewer放在此处好像有些别扭,不如直接说ladies and gentlemen,或者换一个其他的称谓,另外being admitting into HK University is my biggest dream ,which I`m sparing no effort to achieve,这里being admitti...
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