作业帮这是一篇初三学生的作文,请问写的怎么样?
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这是一篇初三学生的作文,请问写的怎么样?
Nowadays,there are many serious problems about our environment.For example,water is polluted,so there is lack of clean water in the world.Then,many trees are cut down,so the air is not fresh enough.Finally,many factories produce dirty gases into the air,this leads to serious problems,too. Here is some advice to solve the problems.First of all,do not throw rubbish at will.On the other hand,you should try to use fewer or not to use plastic bags.Above all,reusing the old objects is a good way,too. In my view,protecting the environment is not only meaningful but also important.I hope more and more people regard it as their responsibilities.If we work together,our environment will not be polluted,our life must be better and better at the same time! Thank you for listening to my speech.
Nowadays,there are many serious problems about our environment.For example,water is polluted,so there is lack of clean water in the world.Then,many trees are cut down,so the air is not fresh enough.Finally,many factories produce dirty gases into the air,this leads to serious problems,too. Here is some advice to solve the problems.First of all,do not throw rubbish at will.On the other hand,you should try to use fewer or not to use plastic bags.Above all,reusing the old objects is a good way,too. In my view,protecting the environment is not only meaningful but also important.I hope more and more people regard it as their responsibilities.If we work together,our environment will not be polluted,our life must be better and better at the same time! Thank you for listening to my speech.
同意那位知友所言,写的真是不错的! 中心突出,文章结构安排合理,条理清晰.出现较少几乎没有语法错误.善用连接词如：first of all,on the other hand……使得文章有条理.且能用上一些长句,提高文章档次. 同时,还发现了你的一个小小错误： gas 的复数是gasses.再提一个小小建议：倒数第四行“In my view,protecting……”一句中将 meaningful 和 important 对调会不会好一些呢?呵呵,仅仅个人意见了啦……(*^__^*) 总之,十分优秀的文章啦.继续加油,祝中考顺利.↖(^ω^)↗希望我的回答能对你有所帮助吧.O(∩_∩)O~
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