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作文修改,谢谢 ( 逻辑+语法!)Topic: When people move to another country,

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作文修改,谢谢 ( 逻辑+语法!)Topic: When people move to another country, some of them decide to
Following the new rules has its inherent advantages when moving to a new community. Obviously, new settlers are likely to adapt to the new environment quickly if they had the same customs with local people, as people tend to closer to those who share the same value, abide by similar rules as well as experience same daily routines with themselves. Besides, it is available for new comers to know about the culture of new place, thereby, cultivating the ability of how to accept, appreciate and respect the different cultures. Also, the experience of living with local inhabitants enable the new comers to be more tolerant. If they insist their previous thoughts and behaviors, the conflicts may aroused when their believe are different.(because the more one get through in life, the more ideas and thoughts they can easily accept)
我只看到了这几个点有问题
不能说another,decide to后面应该接动词原形
When people move to other countries,some of them decide to——(ect:settle down)
纠结一下~,英语很勉强