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麻烦高人对这个英文引言 做个评价 对他的用词 句型等等做一下评价 写的那里好 这是我的作业
就是老师要求找个英文论文引言部分 分析一下那里写的好 怎么好法~随便论文什么方向,只需要分析它的句型啊用词啊结构 等等那里好就行 我这里有个论文 高手们也可以帮我找别的分析也行 邮箱也可以yuzhaoyang2006@yahoo.com.cn
我找的引言如下 :
Industrial characteristics,environmental regulations and air pollution:an analysis of the UK manufacturing sector
Abstract
This paper examines and quantifies the complex linkages between industrial activity,environmental regulations and air pollution.Couched in terms of the demand for,and the supply of,environmental services we utilize a new dataset of UK industry specific emissions for a variety of pollutants between 1990 and 1998.Our analysis allows us to investigate the role played by different determinants of emissions intensity.We find pollution intensity to be a positive function of energy use and physical and human capital intensity.Conversely,we find pollution intensity to be a negative function of the size of the average firm in an industry,the productivity of an industry and the industry's expenditure on capital and research and development.Our results also indicate that regulations,both formal and informal,have been successful in reducing pollution intensity.
忘记了~最好用英文评价~
这篇引言在结构上,我觉得长句很多,将句子的意思用长句一次性地表达出来.就词汇方面看,用了很多专业术语,显得文章更加有档次.另外,像Conversely,between这写=些副词就用的很好,能很好的衔接.句型上,种类很多,简单句不用说了.第二句是过去分词作原因状语,后边还有补充说明的状语.最后一句明显用了宾语从句.find ...to be,allows ... to 等词组也用地恰当.
我现在也很久没有学习英语了,能说的就这样了.
以后,上课好好听,老师的作业,思考了总有收获,我的只是参考.