跪求英语大虾帮忙修改英语作文,改的好再加80分.
来源:学生作业帮 编辑:作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/09/02 05:52:04
跪求英语大虾帮忙修改英语作文,改的好再加80分.
Dear Sam
I went to Beijing with my best friend Linda ast summer vacation.We went to the museum.there were had anything fun;it was very interesting.The Beijing was suny,but air was bad,because there was had sandstorm.We were crying in second day.,bcause we went to the Yiheyuan.There was very bad!The wasmy vacatian.How about you?
Yous,
××
Dear Sam
I went to Beijing with my best friend Linda ast summer vacation.We went to the museum.there were had anything fun;it was very interesting.The Beijing was suny,but air was bad,because there was had sandstorm.We were crying in second day.,bcause we went to the Yiheyuan.There was very bad!The wasmy vacatian.How about you?
Yous,
××
Dear Sam,
I visited to Beijing with my best friend Linda during vacation last summer.We went to the museum and everything there was fun and interesting.Beijing was very sunny,but the air was bad because there was a sandstorm.We cried on the second day because we went to the Yi He Yuan,which was terrible.That was my vacation,how was yours?
Yours truely,
xx
帮你改了些语法错误和spelling~
我是美国学校的学生,你放心吧~
I visited to Beijing with my best friend Linda during vacation last summer.We went to the museum and everything there was fun and interesting.Beijing was very sunny,but the air was bad because there was a sandstorm.We cried on the second day because we went to the Yi He Yuan,which was terrible.That was my vacation,how was yours?
Yours truely,
xx
帮你改了些语法错误和spelling~
我是美国学校的学生,你放心吧~