作业帮高中英语作文,请给位大大帮忙修改一下,指出不足,最好教我一下怎样写好英语作文哈!
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高中英语作文,请给位大大帮忙修改一下,指出不足,最好教我一下怎样写好英语作文哈!
There is an old picture of some primaries in class.Above the picture,you can see the students who were very active with raising their all hands.But in our time as their age,to the class,we were not so interseted and always put our idea out of the class.On the one hand,the class is really boring ,and on the other hand ,the reason is in personal.
So in my opinion,I think our primary class need to learning from some other countries,like the US ,the UK and so on .The primaries should be tough what means the happy class,and they should be given a happy childhood.
There is an old picture of some primaries in class.Above the picture,you can see the students who were very active with raising their all hands.But in our time as their age,to the class,we were not so interseted and always put our idea out of the class.On the one hand,the class is really boring ,and on the other hand ,the reason is in personal.
So in my opinion,I think our primary class need to learning from some other countries,like the US ,the UK and so on .The primaries should be tough what means the happy class,and they should be given a happy childhood.
Above the picture 改成from the picture
be interest in 是原配词组,你这句话 to the class,we were not so interseted ,调整语序后,应是
we were not so interseted in the class ,所以感觉你用to 不是很恰当
need to do learning 貌似要改一下
be interest in 是原配词组,你这句话 to the class,we were not so interseted ,调整语序后,应是
we were not so interseted in the class ,所以感觉你用to 不是很恰当
need to do learning 貌似要改一下