作业帮下面这篇文章的错误在哪里
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下面这篇文章的错误在哪里
短文改错：I should have been a business meeting ,but at seven
o'clock i found myself at the Reed's Bar and Grill because of Roger
which has the skill of getting people to do what he wants us to do .The
restaurant was at busiest and noisiest time .Rorer,who had got there first
,wave at me from the bar .I stared toward him,but the waiter going by at full
Speed with a tray on his shoulder ran into me .The tray flying into the air ,
And it has rained noodles and meatballs.You could imagine how I looked at that
moment.Anybody in the room was straing at me with their mouthes half open.
总共有十处错误
短文改错：I should have been a business meeting ,but at seven
o'clock i found myself at the Reed's Bar and Grill because of Roger
which has the skill of getting people to do what he wants us to do .The
restaurant was at busiest and noisiest time .Rorer,who had got there first
,wave at me from the bar .I stared toward him,but the waiter going by at full
Speed with a tray on his shoulder ran into me .The tray flying into the air ,
And it has rained noodles and meatballs.You could imagine how I looked at that
moment.Anybody in the room was straing at me with their mouthes half open.
总共有十处错误
1, 第一行been 后面加 at
2,第二行 which 改成 who
3,第三行 wants us to do 改成 want them to do
4,第四行 at 改成 in
5,第五行 wave 改成waved； toward改成at
7,第六行 Speed 不用大写； flying 改成flew
8,第七行 and不用大写；it has rained 改成 it started raining； looked后面加like
9,第八行 anybody改成everybody
这个段落错误不只十处啊,而且就算改过之后,写的也不怎样啊~
2,第二行 which 改成 who
3,第三行 wants us to do 改成 want them to do
4,第四行 at 改成 in
5,第五行 wave 改成waved； toward改成at
7,第六行 Speed 不用大写； flying 改成flew
8,第七行 and不用大写；it has rained 改成 it started raining； looked后面加like
9,第八行 anybody改成everybody
这个段落错误不只十处啊,而且就算改过之后,写的也不怎样啊~