作业帮麻烦看一下有没有语法错误?
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麻烦看一下有没有语法错误?
It‘s the second time for me to be here to attend the spoken English contest.Last year,I got the first prize.
My family embroider the picture on the clothes for a living.Myparents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines.Sometimes I help them move the clothes.
It‘s the second time for me to be here to attend the spoken English contest.Last year,I got the first prize.
My family embroider the picture on the clothes for a living.Myparents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines.Sometimes I help them move the clothes.
文法上你写的句子并没有甚麼错,但句子结构则有修饰的须要,为了尊重你的原文,我照原意顺序替你更正如下:
It‘s the second time (for me to be here to attend改为 that I took part in) the spoken English contest.Last year,I got(可以考虑改为 won) the first prize.
My (family embroider 改为 family's business is embroidering) (去掉 the) picture(s) on (去掉the) clothes(去掉 for a living).My parents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines (要加 now).Sometimes I help them (要加 to) move the clothes
更正後的版本:
It‘s the second time that I took part in the spoken English contest.Last year,I won the first prize.
My family's business is embroidering pictures on clothes.My parents are not only bosses but also the workers; Look,they are working with embroidery machines now.Sometimes I help them to move the clothes
很乐意能够帮到你,希望会对你有助.
再问： 语法有错么（原文）
再答： embroider the picture on the clothes 应该是: embroider pictures on clothes. Look,they are working with embroidery machines 後面要加一个 now 才合语气的要求。
再问： QAQ 老师说这样的（原文）
再答： 那麼你的老师可能有少许错了。因为 embroider the picture on the clothes 是把"一张图案"绣在所有的衣服上，the picture 是指定的一张照片。即是说你父母的生意是绣图案在衣服上，但绣的全部是相同的一张照片(图案)。 所以应该是: embroider pictures on clothes. 绣(不同的)图案在衣服上才对。 另外: 定冠词 the 的用法，顾名思义，是用以指定一样事物用的。同样一个字，加上 the 和不加意思是有分别的，例如: Man is a kind of animals 人类是一种动物。(是人的统称) The man is an animal. "这个人"是个衣冠禽兽。(是指定其中的一个 人)
It‘s the second time (for me to be here to attend改为 that I took part in) the spoken English contest.Last year,I got(可以考虑改为 won) the first prize.
My (family embroider 改为 family's business is embroidering) (去掉 the) picture(s) on (去掉the) clothes(去掉 for a living).My parents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines (要加 now).Sometimes I help them (要加 to) move the clothes
更正後的版本:
It‘s the second time that I took part in the spoken English contest.Last year,I won the first prize.
My family's business is embroidering pictures on clothes.My parents are not only bosses but also the workers; Look,they are working with embroidery machines now.Sometimes I help them to move the clothes
很乐意能够帮到你,希望会对你有助.
再问： 语法有错么（原文）
再答： embroider the picture on the clothes 应该是: embroider pictures on clothes. Look,they are working with embroidery machines 後面要加一个 now 才合语气的要求。
再问： QAQ 老师说这样的（原文）
再答： 那麼你的老师可能有少许错了。因为 embroider the picture on the clothes 是把"一张图案"绣在所有的衣服上，the picture 是指定的一张照片。即是说你父母的生意是绣图案在衣服上，但绣的全部是相同的一张照片(图案)。 所以应该是: embroider pictures on clothes. 绣(不同的)图案在衣服上才对。 另外: 定冠词 the 的用法，顾名思义，是用以指定一样事物用的。同样一个字，加上 the 和不加意思是有分别的，例如: Man is a kind of animals 人类是一种动物。(是人的统称) The man is an animal. "这个人"是个衣冠禽兽。(是指定其中的一个 人)