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各位帮忙看下这篇作文的毛病.语法错误等等都行.
Cultural heritages
The passage tells us that destoried by people,80 persents of The Great Wall which was built and rebulit by lots of dynasties in the past 2000 years is in danger and call on us to protect it.
From the point of my view,the phenomenon that our previous cultural heritages are being destoried should lead to our attention.It is an irresponsible behaviour that should be banned and punished.
As the matter of fact,protcting our cultural heritages is filled with many advantages.On one hand,cultural heritages are a way in which we can study and know more about our own histories .On the other hand ,by doing so,it is benefical to us to show our best respectation to the ancients.
Therefore,it is very important for us to protect cultural heritages.First of all,ti is a good idea to set up some laws to protected them from being destoried.Besides,we had better to arouse our awareness of protecting cultural heritages and only in these ways can we protect our cultural heritages better.
要求1 你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的
2 保护文化遗产有和意义
3保护我国的文化遗产的建议
Cultural heritages
The passage tells us that destoried by people,80 persents of The Great Wall which was built and rebulit by lots of dynasties in the past 2000 years is in danger and call on us to protect it.
From the point of my view,the phenomenon that our previous cultural heritages are being destoried should lead to our attention.It is an irresponsible behaviour that should be banned and punished.
As the matter of fact,protcting our cultural heritages is filled with many advantages.On one hand,cultural heritages are a way in which we can study and know more about our own histories .On the other hand ,by doing so,it is benefical to us to show our best respectation to the ancients.
Therefore,it is very important for us to protect cultural heritages.First of all,ti is a good idea to set up some laws to protected them from being destoried.Besides,we had better to arouse our awareness of protecting cultural heritages and only in these ways can we protect our cultural heritages better.
要求1 你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的
2 保护文化遗产有和意义
3保护我国的文化遗产的建议
The passage tells us that destoried by people,80 persents of The Great Wall which was built and rebulit by lots of dynasties in the past 2000 years is in danger and call on us to protect it.
这句太长了,看着烦,切成小句更上口.
lead to our attention.改为arouse our attention.【lead to 为导致坏结果】
benefical 拼写错误beneficial
这句太长了,看着烦,切成小句更上口.
lead to our attention.改为arouse our attention.【lead to 为导致坏结果】
benefical 拼写错误beneficial