英语作文With the development of the society,more and more people

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英语作文
With the development of the society,more and more people believe that everyone should protect the Earth.Some people speak highly of protecting the Earth.In my opinion,it's our duty to protect environment.Everyone should put measure to protect our mother Earth as soon as possible.
For example,every day we can walk or ride a bike to school so that it can reduce the number of CO2.And when we go out,we can turn off the lights.What's more,we shouldn't waste the water.
Personally,protecting the Earth will contribute a lot to people's developments.I will try my best to protect the Earth,because we have only one Earth.

首先这篇文章错误不多值得肯定
但是感觉太罗嗦也没有具体的例子说了很多空话
可以更简洁些不过对中学生来说已经不错了
下面就文章中的错误给予纠正
1.the number of co2 改为the quantity of carbon dioxide
2.when we go out 改为when we are outdoors
3.we can turn off the lights 改为 we should turn off the light 更好
4 we shouldn't waste the water.
去掉 the
5 people's developments 改为 human developments
就这些了加油!

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