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英语好的请进!帮忙改语法的删字数I used to think that television is only a to

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英语好的请进!
帮忙改语法的删字数
I used to think that television is only a tool which introduces the world to me. Until one day, I saw myself on the television screen.
That time I was at my 4th grade and took part in a talk show representing of my school. Even though I lost the champion by only 1 point, I was happy about my performance. The other day I saw the rebroadcast and found that my brilliant speech was relentlessly cut away, only some cliché was left. I was annoyed by the editor of the program. But then I suddenly realized that Television was not only an entertainment, but also the stage that show off ourselves---------at least through two ways: one is directly putting ourselves on the screen; the other one is presenting the best part to the audience via editing.
I was touched by the thought. A month later, my first editing software---Ulead Videostudio 5 moved into my PC. Since then my computer was no longer a game machine and become much busier than the era when conquered E.T.s. I was falling in love with
That time I was at my 4th grade - I was in the 4th grade
took part in a talk show representing of my school - represented my school in a talk show
champion - championship
rebroadcast - rerun of the show
cut away - cut short
cliche?
editor - producer
that show off ourselves - on which we can show off ourselves
presenting the best part to the audience via editing - providing the audience with the best possible show
moved into - was installed onto
was - is
become - has become
much busier than the era when conquered E.T.s.I was falling in love with