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先填表格,再写作文。100——150字 写一篇关于音乐会的文章 type of music group/sings time/place performance music songs sound quality lighting/special effects audience reaction 拿到题我没什么思路,不知道如何写,希望老师给些思路,不知道这类题怎样适当发挥,希望老师能给篇例文。
解题思路: 见下
解题过程:
先填表格,再写作文。100——150字
写一篇关于音乐会的文章
type of music
Pop music (jazz rock and roll)
group/sings
S.H.E
time/place
19:30 December 12th music Hall in Changjiang University
performance
good
music
Exciting
songs
Super Star
sound quality
excellent
lighting/special effects
Very good
audience reaction
Excited, attracted
参考作文:
A concert was held in the music hall of Changjiang University on December 12th. It started at 19:30. The music group was made up of excellent musicians and S.H.E were the main singers. They brought us a wonderful performance with excellent sound quality and exciting pop music. And along with the good lighting effects the music and songs attracted the audience and made them excited. They spent a wonderful night there.
这种半自由式作文是好写的一种。因为你可以挑自己知道的、自己会写的来完成。但不能丢掉所列要点,所以这点稍难。只要你能保证文章连贯通顺,避免错误语句,那么分数是不会太低的。平时要多背诵课文和重点句子来培养语感,写作就会很轻松的。
书面表达步骤:
1、三审:审人称、审时态、审体裁。
2、组词成句:先把要点例全,一一写出。
3、组句成文:注意句子之间要有适当的过度词、插入语,或者从句连接词,使全文连贯。
4、通读修正:最后通读下,修正个别不妥之处。
誊写上卷。
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