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During the Ming Dynasty, a study in Beijing to the west of the town, there is a pair of good friends. They have strenuously hard reading, an own goal, that is admitted to the top, the other is not the goal. Target man asked the man without a goal: "why didn't you target?" Unexpectedly, the man said: "man wrong, what is the use of a goal, all knowledge in the chest, there is no goal no." The thing that day, people with a goal in the first place, and the other who didn't even a Jinshi, spend half in and, busy life. This is no difference between the target, target man float upon the clouds, man without a goal is life-long regret.
This is a small story is simple and easy to understand, but we can figure out some learning from nature. In the era of fierce competition between the loser and winner of today's talent, really only one step away, that is, there is no goal. We are also learning, according to the intelligence difference between scientists study of people is not large, but why people between learning achievement was different? The key is to have the learning objectives. With learning goals, there is hope, there is the power of the struggle. This power encouraged us not to give up every day, every hour, every minute. Every small success are shortened and the front target distance. Success motivation, success, step two, we do not give up, we keep on going.
The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is not, nor is the opportunity, but there is
During the Ming Dynasty, a study in Beijing to the west of the town, there is a pair of good friends. They have strenuously hard reading, an own goal, that is admitted to the top, the other is not the goal. Target man asked the man without a goal: "why didn't you target?" Unexpectedly, the man said: "man wrong, what is the use of a goal, all knowledge in the chest, there is no goal no." The thing that day, people with a goal in the first place, and the other who didn't even a Jinshi, spend half in and, busy life. This is no difference between the target, target man float upon the clouds, man without a goal is life-long regret.
This is a small story is simple and easy to understand, but we can figure out some learning from nature. In the era of fierce competition between the loser and winner of today's talent, really only one step away, that is, there is no goal. We are also learning, according to the intelligence difference between scientists study of people is not large, but why people between learning achievement was different? The key is to have the learning objectives. With learning goals, there is hope, there is the power of the struggle. This power encouraged us not to give up every day, every hour, every minute. Every small success are shortened and the front target distance. Success motivation, success, step two, we do not give up, we keep on going.
The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is not, nor is the opportunity, but there is
建议到句库批改网去批改 一般语法错误都能改出来
第1段
1.1
During the Ming Dynasty, a study in Beijing to the west of the town, there is a pair of good friends. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意.
1.2
They have strenuously hard reading, an own goal, that is admitted to the top, the other is not the goal. [修改]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[名词错误] 冠词错误,an own不规范,建议修改.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...reading 在教材中出现过 265 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] admit意思为“允许,准许进入”注意与permit区别.详情点击
1.3
Target man asked the man without a goal: "why didn't you target? " [修改]
[低频警示] the man without a goal 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ask...man 在教材中出现过 352 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ask, beg, demand, require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求,请求”之意.
1.4
Unexpectedly, the man said: "man wrong, what is the use of a goal, all knowledge in the chest, there is no goal no. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: breast, bosom, chest 均含“胸,胸部”之意.
1.5
" The thing that day, people with a goal in the first place, and the other who didn't even a Jinshi, spend half in and, busy life. [修改]
[低频警示] busy...life 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] people表示“人,民族”.查看与person的区别.
[批改提示] 查看who和whoever,whom的区别.
1.6
This is no difference between the target, target man float upon the clouds, man without a goal is life-long regret. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] 注意difference和disparity,distinction区别.
第2段
2.1
This is a small story is simple and easy to understand, but we can figure out some learning from nature. [修改]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[低频警示] some learning from nature 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy 均含“简单的,轻易的”之意.
[其他] small的近义表达有minor/insignificant等.
[批改提示] understand的近义表达有appreciate.
2.2
In the era of fierce competition between the loser and winner of today's talent, really only one step away, that is, there is no goal. [修改]
[低频警示] fierce competition between the loser 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: competition, contest, match 均有“比赛,竞争”之意.
2.3
We are also learning, according to the intelligence difference between scientists study of people is not large, but why people between learning achievement was different? [修改]
[低频警示] the intelligence difference 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合,一致”之意.
[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire
[批改提示] according to在做“根据”讲时,近义表达有in accordance with.
[批改提示] large的同意表达有miraculous或marvelous .
2.4
The key is to have the learning objectives. [修改]
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...objective 在教材中出现过 385 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
2.5
With learning goals, there is hope, there is the power of the struggle. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
2.6
This power encouraged us not to give up every day, every hour, every minute. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: encourage, inspire, excite, stimulate 均表“鼓励,激励”之意.
2.7
Every small success are shortened and the front target distance. [修改]
[动词错误] 主谓不一致,请检查Every small success are,动词建议用第三人称单数.
[低频警示] shorten...success 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] target...distance 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] the front target distance 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: each, every 都有“每一个”之意.
2.8
Success motivation, success, step two, we do not give up, we keep on going. [修改]
[句子错误] 句中不同单句之间需要添加连词.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer,grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予,赠给”之意.
[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain
第3段
3.1
The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is not, nor is the opportunity, but there is [修改]
[动词错误] 主谓不一致,请检查The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is,谓语动词建议用复数.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[句子错误] 句子不完整
[低频警示] fundamental...person 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] the mediocre talent difference 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
第1段
1.1
During the Ming Dynasty, a study in Beijing to the west of the town, there is a pair of good friends. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意.
1.2
They have strenuously hard reading, an own goal, that is admitted to the top, the other is not the goal. [修改]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[名词错误] 冠词错误,an own不规范,建议修改.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...reading 在教材中出现过 265 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] admit意思为“允许,准许进入”注意与permit区别.详情点击
1.3
Target man asked the man without a goal: "why didn't you target? " [修改]
[低频警示] the man without a goal 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ask...man 在教材中出现过 352 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ask, beg, demand, require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求,请求”之意.
1.4
Unexpectedly, the man said: "man wrong, what is the use of a goal, all knowledge in the chest, there is no goal no. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: breast, bosom, chest 均含“胸,胸部”之意.
1.5
" The thing that day, people with a goal in the first place, and the other who didn't even a Jinshi, spend half in and, busy life. [修改]
[低频警示] busy...life 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] people表示“人,民族”.查看与person的区别.
[批改提示] 查看who和whoever,whom的区别.
1.6
This is no difference between the target, target man float upon the clouds, man without a goal is life-long regret. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
[批改提示] 注意difference和disparity,distinction区别.
第2段
2.1
This is a small story is simple and easy to understand, but we can figure out some learning from nature. [修改]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[低频警示] some learning from nature 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy 均含“简单的,轻易的”之意.
[其他] small的近义表达有minor/insignificant等.
[批改提示] understand的近义表达有appreciate.
2.2
In the era of fierce competition between the loser and winner of today's talent, really only one step away, that is, there is no goal. [修改]
[低频警示] fierce competition between the loser 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: competition, contest, match 均有“比赛,竞争”之意.
2.3
We are also learning, according to the intelligence difference between scientists study of people is not large, but why people between learning achievement was different? [修改]
[低频警示] the intelligence difference 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合,一致”之意.
[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire
[批改提示] according to在做“根据”讲时,近义表达有in accordance with.
[批改提示] large的同意表达有miraculous或marvelous .
2.4
The key is to have the learning objectives. [修改]
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...objective 在教材中出现过 385 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
2.5
With learning goals, there is hope, there is the power of the struggle. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标,目的”之意.
2.6
This power encouraged us not to give up every day, every hour, every minute. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: encourage, inspire, excite, stimulate 均表“鼓励,激励”之意.
2.7
Every small success are shortened and the front target distance. [修改]
[动词错误] 主谓不一致,请检查Every small success are,动词建议用第三人称单数.
[低频警示] shorten...success 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] target...distance 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] the front target distance 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: each, every 都有“每一个”之意.
2.8
Success motivation, success, step two, we do not give up, we keep on going. [修改]
[句子错误] 句中不同单句之间需要添加连词.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer,grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予,赠给”之意.
[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain
第3段
3.1
The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is not, nor is the opportunity, but there is [修改]
[动词错误] 主谓不一致,请检查The most fundamental outstanding person and the mediocre talent difference is,谓语动词建议用复数.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[句子错误] 句子不完整
[低频警示] fundamental...person 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[低频警示] the mediocre talent difference 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语