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短文改错Today we went to climb the West Hill.Early in morning we

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Today we went to climb the West Hill.Early in morning we started out and arrive an hour late.Then we began to climb.The hill was high and some of us got tired soon,and all of us were very excited.We cheered happy when we got the top.We had our lunch there and enjoyed us very much.Unfortunately,when we walked down off the hill,We were caught in a rain We kept calm,shared umbrella and raincoats and walked carefully.Finally we both reached the parking lot safely.In spite of the rain and wind,we have a good time.哪里有错误,我很着急,
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不会是在考试吧,哈哈哈Today we went to climb the West Hill.Early in the morning we started out and arrived there an hour later. Then we began to climb. The hill was so high that some of us got tired soon, but we were very excited. We cheered happily when we got the top of the hill. We had our lunch there and enjoyed ourself. Unfortunately, when we walked down off the hill, We were caught in a rain ,but We kept calm,shared umbrella and raincoats and walked carefully. Finally we reached the parking lot safely. In spite of the rain and wind, we had a good time.