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句子语法逻辑有没有错Nowadays a great number of people have become succ

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句子语法逻辑有没有错
Nowadays a great number of people have become successful due to their long time's effort while many other people have the desire to succeed truly as well.However,it's certain that being a truly successful person that everyone show respect for isn't the same as which common people consider as.
the desire to succeed 是说 对成功的 信念.跟前面的很多人为了 成功做长期的努力 够不成一个while的关系.while 要么表示同时 要么表示然而,放在这里都不合适.后面一句,改成 it's certain that being a truly successful person that not everyone show respect for the same as which common people consider as.