作业帮英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.
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英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.
Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.
Some citizens are only considerate their convenience in daily life ,but never considerate more about others live and themselves live.
In a word ,we should cherish our life,we are surrounded by many people who is love us .we are grown up hardly by our parents.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of attrafic accident.
Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.
Some citizens are only considerate their convenience in daily life ,but never considerate more about others live and themselves live.
In a word ,we should cherish our life,we are surrounded by many people who is love us .we are grown up hardly by our parents.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of attrafic accident.
Nowadays,more and more traffic accidents occur in the cities where the economies are growing rapidly .Over 30％ of accidents are traffic accidents among all kinds of accients.
Some citizens only consider their convenience in daily life ,but never consider more about other people's lives.
In a word ,we should cherish our life.We are surrounded by many people who love us .It is not easy for our parents to bring us up.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of accident.
改成上文这样,看看OK不
Some citizens only consider their convenience in daily life ,but never consider more about other people's lives.
In a word ,we should cherish our life.We are surrounded by many people who love us .It is not easy for our parents to bring us up.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of accident.
改成上文这样,看看OK不