英语强的帮帮忙,修改下(包括语境错误)谢谢了
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英语强的帮帮忙,修改下(包括语境错误)谢谢了
LOVE IS EVERYTHING
You are my sunshine ,you are my angel.
While i close my eyes,your lovely smile takes up in my mind.My suffering is to disappear.
You are my life ,you are my soul.
While you stand in front of me ,my heart will sing for you.
You are my moonlight,you are my star.
While i walk in the darkness,you can light my way and my heart ,and bring me far away from loneliness.
If you are happy ,i'll be happy.
If you are sad,i'll take the sadness away from you .
No matter how far we live .
No matter what happens.
Whether you know me or not,
My heart won't be changed forever,
My love will be prepared for you forever.
Because love is everything.
我昨天修改了一遍,
LOVE IS EVERYTHING
You are my sunshine ,you are my angel.
While i close my eyes,your lovely smile takes up in my mind.My suffering is to disappear.
You are my life ,you are my soul.
While you stand in front of me ,my heart will sing for you.
You are my moonlight,you are my star.
While i walk in the darkness,you can light my way and my heart ,and bring me far away from loneliness.
If you are happy ,i'll be happy.
If you are sad,i'll take the sadness away from you .
No matter how far we live .
No matter what happens.
Whether you know me or not,
My heart won't be changed forever,
My love will be prepared for you forever.
Because love is everything.
我昨天修改了一遍,
是歌词还是什么别的文体?
应该是takes up my mind
如果是错误的话差不多只有这个了
应该是takes up my mind
如果是错误的话差不多只有这个了
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