作业帮帮我看一下这几个英语句子通不通顺
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帮我看一下这几个英语句子通不通顺
Sally was riding a bike to the park ar 11:00 last Sunday.While seh was watch the sea ,the time was 11:10.At 11:15,a man was taking the bike and get out of the park.Around 11:20,Sally was caming back and didn't find her bike.She was surprise and upsed,and she was calling the police.这是一篇英语作文,不对或不好的地方提出来.
Sally was riding a bike to the park ar 11:00 last Sunday.While seh was watch the sea ,the time was 11:10.At 11:15,a man was taking the bike and get out of the park.Around 11:20,Sally was caming back and didn't find her bike.She was surprise and upsed,and she was calling the police.这是一篇英语作文,不对或不好的地方提出来.
Sally rode to the park at 11:00 last Sunday.It was 11:10 when she watched the sea,a man took away the bike.Around 11:20,Sally came back,but didn't find her bike.She was too surprised and upset,then she called the police.
1、注意时态的用法,不是所有的句子都用进行时,短暂性动词不用进行时.
2、注意动词不同时态的拼写
我不知道作文要求是什么,但切忌不要写成流水账.英文和中文写作是一样的.
1、注意时态的用法,不是所有的句子都用进行时,短暂性动词不用进行时.
2、注意动词不同时态的拼写
我不知道作文要求是什么,但切忌不要写成流水账.英文和中文写作是一样的.