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英语作文~A china dog

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英语作文~A china dog
A china dog
When my sister birthday ,I gave her a nice dog .But it is not real ,It’s a china dog .She was very happy and she took it on her desk .
The china dog has long white hair ,a round face and a short brown tail .Its eras are big and brown .It has a pair of shining eyes .Its nose looks like a triangle .It is small and a little thin .The dog lifts up its head and the most interesting thing is it is in a pair of black glasses .
Oh What a lovely and cool china dog My sister and I are like it a lot .We will protection well ,let it not to break.
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A china dog (作文题目的规范:单词的首字母应该大些,但是介词的首字母如果不是第一个单词不大写.)
When my sister birthday (我姐姐的生日,应该这样表达sister's),I gave her a nice dog .But it is not real ,It’s a china dog .She was very happy and she took it on her desk .(took 改成 put(putd 的过去式是原型),put 有放的意思,took 是take 的原型,有随身携带,拿的意思.)
The china dog has long white hair ,a round face and a short brown tail .Its eras are big and brown .It has a pair of shining eyes .Its nose looks like a triangle .It is small and a little thin .The dog lifts up its head and the most interesting thing is(此处加that) it is in a pair of black glasses .Oh !What a lovely and cool china dog !My sister and I are like it a lot .(are 去掉,因为此句话like是实义动词喜欢的意思,不能再用系动词are) We will protection well (protection 是名称形式应该改成动词形式的protect,后面还应该加上it),let it not to break.(let 是祈使句,祈使句的否定形式改成Don't let it break)