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英语好的来~All of us have dreams.When I was a primary school stud

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英语好的来~
All of us have dreams.
When I was a primary school student,
I wanted to be a cartoonist
To draw a lot of cartoons
That make people to enjoy cartoons.
When I was a middle school student,
I wanted to be a Costume Player
To art as a lot of cartoon roles
That bring me happiness
I always change my dream
A changeable dream
All right.
看下有没语法错~
1.That make people to enjoy cartoons.
"to"应该省去.(make sb.do sth.)
2.That bring me happiness
“bring”用“brings”(that做主语后为单三形式)
(时态的问题:第一、二段用的是过去时,但是末句用一般时,我不敢确定是不是你故意的..不建议改掉)
剩下的应该没什么语法性的错误了.