英文作文改错Last Sunday,my parent and i went to the part by bike.i

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Last Sunday,my parent and i went to the part by bike.i was very excited.because it was my first time bu bike.on the park way.i rode slowly.sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.my parent smiled at me.we were very happy!in the park,there were alot of flowers here,the flowers were very beatiful,i was running away ahead of my parent,but soon i had to slow down,because i was tired,isat down under the big tree.this park attract mang visitors.among these visitors was alittle girl,she was my friends
i was very surprised.i gave her some fuits and pulled her to sat down.we talked about the holidays.My My TIme flies,i wat home.i had a good time at park

Last Sunday,my parent and i went to the park by bike.i was very excited.because it was my first time riding bike.on the park way.i rode slowly,sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.my parent smiled at me.we were very happy!in the park,there were a lot of flowers here,the flowers are very beatiful,i was running away ahead of my parent,but soon later i had to slow down,because i was tired,i sat down by a big tree.this park attracts many visitors.among these visitors,there was a little girl,she is my friends ,which surprised me,
i gave her some fruits and invited her to sit down ,then we talked about the holidays.As tIme flies,i went home.that's the good time i had in the park .或者Last Sunday,my parents and i went to the park by bike.I was very excited,because it was my first time take a bike.On the park way,i rode slowly.Sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.My parents smiled at me.We were very happy!There were a lot of flowers in the park,and the flowers were very beautiful.I was running away and ahead of my parents,but soon i had to slow down because i was tired.Then i sat down under the big tree.This park attracts mang visitors.Among these visitors,there was a little girl,who is my friend.