作业帮英语作文 难忘的一天，求改正！
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谢谢！
解题思路： 文章结构好，总分总三段。文意优美动人！英文语句表达流畅。 但卷面勾抹太多哦！！！
解题过程：
同学，你好！ 很高兴为你答疑解惑！
文章结构好，总分总三段。文意优美动人！英文语句表达流畅。
但卷面勾抹太多哦！！！
建议稍作修改：
An unforgettable day April 25, 2012 was an unforgettable day for me, because(逗号，原因状语从句) we saw a moving film in our English class, the name of which（定语从句更高档） is “Helen Keller”. The film makes more sense than any Hollywood masterpiece, though(逗号，状语从句)it is a black and white one. To my surprise, our English teacher allowed us to see an English film in class.（调整一下句子顺序） In fact Helen Keller’s painful childhood impressed me so much that (给我印象如此深刻) I couldn’t help keeping back my tears.（我禁不住流泪） Meanwhile, our English teacher never gave up the chance to teach us a lesson. He encouraged us to learn from Helen Keller（鼓励我们向海伦。凯勒学习）to study hard and enjoy life（努力学习，并享受人生）. It was a magic day, an unforgettable day.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学，你好！ 很高兴为你答疑解惑！
文章结构好，总分总三段。文意优美动人！英文语句表达流畅。
但卷面勾抹太多哦！！！
建议稍作修改：
An unforgettable day April 25, 2012 was an unforgettable day for me, because(逗号，原因状语从句) we saw a moving film in our English class, the name of which（定语从句更高档） is “Helen Keller”. The film makes more sense than any Hollywood masterpiece, though(逗号，状语从句)it is a black and white one. To my surprise, our English teacher allowed us to see an English film in class.（调整一下句子顺序） In fact Helen Keller’s painful childhood impressed me so much that (给我印象如此深刻) I couldn’t help keeping back my tears.（我禁不住流泪） Meanwhile, our English teacher never gave up the chance to teach us a lesson. He encouraged us to learn from Helen Keller（鼓励我们向海伦。凯勒学习）to study hard and enjoy life（努力学习，并享受人生）. It was a magic day, an unforgettable day.
最终答案：略