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帮我批改一篇高中英语作文
首先这篇作文整体不错.但字迹太草,有个别地方有语法错误,一定要改正.
we are going to hold a special party for ...,At the party,不是on.cut the birthday cake 不是cut up(切碎),you should 不妥,改成you'd better,he will be surprised.不是surprise.
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