作业帮求修改演讲稿~~~~~高分~~~!~~~~~~~~!
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求修改演讲稿~~~~~高分~~~!~~~~~~~~!
Good evening everybody! It's my pleasure to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk about something between teenagers and parents.
Nowadays, a large number of teenagers think that parents are not so kind to us as before. But parents usually say that we don’t listen to them. And they always let us stop watching TV or playing computer games that go to study. That makes us have less talking with our parents. It’s not good for our growth.
In other to solve this problem, we should try to talk with our parents in a friendly manner and be patient to our parents. Tell your parents your opinion and try to let them understand us. At the same time, we should also think what our parents think. As a result, the problem between parents and us will be smaller and smaller. Here are some parents and teenagers’ skills in communication.
1、Compliment their advantages.
2、Listen to parents carefully when they talk with you.
3、Try to help parents do some housework.
In fact, the problem between parents and teenagers are all easy to solve. I think we should try to understand our parents better and grow up with our parents!
Hope you all enjoy my speech, thank you!
帮忙看看有没有中文式英语 语法错误 表达不流畅神马的 谢谢了啊
Good evening everybody! It's my pleasure to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk about something between teenagers and parents.
Nowadays, a large number of teenagers think that parents are not so kind to us as before. But parents usually say that we don’t listen to them. And they always let us stop watching TV or playing computer games that go to study. That makes us have less talking with our parents. It’s not good for our growth.
In other to solve this problem, we should try to talk with our parents in a friendly manner and be patient to our parents. Tell your parents your opinion and try to let them understand us. At the same time, we should also think what our parents think. As a result, the problem between parents and us will be smaller and smaller. Here are some parents and teenagers’ skills in communication.
1、Compliment their advantages.
2、Listen to parents carefully when they talk with you.
3、Try to help parents do some housework.
In fact, the problem between parents and teenagers are all easy to solve. I think we should try to understand our parents better and grow up with our parents!
Hope you all enjoy my speech, thank you!
帮忙看看有没有中文式英语 语法错误 表达不流畅神马的 谢谢了啊
Good evening everybody!It's my pleasure（Honor可能比pleasure更好） to speak here（,and I am very glad to share my topic with you.重复了,可省）（Then多余,可省） today I'd like to talk about something（something改成 the relationship更确切） between teenagers and parents.
Nowadays,a large number of teenagers think that parents are not so kind to us（us改成them,或者之前添加类似“自己也是teenager”这种意思的句子,不然前面给我的感觉是teenager是你讨论的对象,是个第三人称,后面这个us就不确切了.后文也有这个问题,就不重复说了） as before.But parents usually say that we don’t listen to them.And they always let us stop watching TV or playing computer games that（that应为to） go to study.That makes us have less talking（talking改为communication更好） with our parents.It’s not good for our growth.
In other（other应为order） to solve this problem,we should try to talk with our parents in a friendly manner and be patient to our parents.Tell your parents your opinion and try to let them understand us.At the same time,we should also think what our parents think.As a result（as a result 改为 if you can do all the things above更好）,the problem between parents and us will be smaller and smaller.Here are some parents and teenagers’ skills in communication.（some 后面的部分改为 communication skills in the relationship between parents and teenagers）
1、（加个give） Compliment （加个on,compliment本身是个名词,没有办法直接作用于后面的宾语） their advantages.
2、Listen to parents carefully when they talk with you.
3、Try to help parents do some housework.
In fact,the problem between parents and teenagers are all easy to solve.I think we should try to understand our parents better and grow up with our parents!
Hope you all enjoy my speech,thank you!
大致还是可以的,基本就这些问题.平时读英语文章的时候多注意积累,相信你会做得更好.
托拉斯英语团队为您服务
Nowadays,a large number of teenagers think that parents are not so kind to us（us改成them,或者之前添加类似“自己也是teenager”这种意思的句子,不然前面给我的感觉是teenager是你讨论的对象,是个第三人称,后面这个us就不确切了.后文也有这个问题,就不重复说了） as before.But parents usually say that we don’t listen to them.And they always let us stop watching TV or playing computer games that（that应为to） go to study.That makes us have less talking（talking改为communication更好） with our parents.It’s not good for our growth.
In other（other应为order） to solve this problem,we should try to talk with our parents in a friendly manner and be patient to our parents.Tell your parents your opinion and try to let them understand us.At the same time,we should also think what our parents think.As a result（as a result 改为 if you can do all the things above更好）,the problem between parents and us will be smaller and smaller.Here are some parents and teenagers’ skills in communication.（some 后面的部分改为 communication skills in the relationship between parents and teenagers）
1、（加个give） Compliment （加个on,compliment本身是个名词,没有办法直接作用于后面的宾语） their advantages.
2、Listen to parents carefully when they talk with you.
3、Try to help parents do some housework.
In fact,the problem between parents and teenagers are all easy to solve.I think we should try to understand our parents better and grow up with our parents!
Hope you all enjoy my speech,thank you!
大致还是可以的,基本就这些问题.平时读英语文章的时候多注意积累,相信你会做得更好.
托拉斯英语团队为您服务