作业帮请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文
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请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文
My favorite star
I hvae a favorite star.Her English name is ***.She isbeautiful.
She is tall,becauese her legs are long.Her hair is long and black.
She like pink and red best.She can speak Chinese、English and Japanses.Her hobbies are sining、dancing、reaing and so on.She dacing is very good.She work is hard.She is very friendly to her fans,so she has many good friend.I like is a lot.Guess,what is her Chinese?
请帮我指出错误并改正,如果改得好,
My favorite star
I hvae a favorite star.Her English name is ***.She isbeautiful.
She is tall,becauese her legs are long.Her hair is long and black.
She like pink and red best.She can speak Chinese、English and Japanses.Her hobbies are sining、dancing、reaing and so on.She dacing is very good.She work is hard.She is very friendly to her fans,so she has many good friend.I like is a lot.Guess,what is her Chinese?
请帮我指出错误并改正,如果改得好,
i HAVE a favorite star.Her English name is ***.She is beautiful.
She is tall, becauese her legs are long.Her hair is long and black.
She LIKES pink and red THE MOST.She can speak Chinese、English and JAPANESE.Her hobbies are sining、dancing、reaing and so on. HER dacing is very good.She WORKS hard.She is very friendly to her fans,so she has many good FRIENDS.I like HER a lot.Guess,what is her Chinese NAME?
大写是我帮你改的.楼主初中生吧,刚开始学的时候千万记得主谓一致（单复数）然后形容词性的代词和名词性的代词要区别开!
She is tall, becauese her legs are long.Her hair is long and black.
She LIKES pink and red THE MOST.She can speak Chinese、English and JAPANESE.Her hobbies are sining、dancing、reaing and so on. HER dacing is very good.She WORKS hard.She is very friendly to her fans,so she has many good FRIENDS.I like HER a lot.Guess,what is her Chinese NAME?
大写是我帮你改的.楼主初中生吧,刚开始学的时候千万记得主谓一致（单复数）然后形容词性的代词和名词性的代词要区别开!