作业帮请为下面这段话改错,并说明错在哪儿了（详细）
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请为下面这段话改错,并说明错在哪儿了（详细）
麻烦改一下.谢啦.
I want a day or computer.Because now,peopel always use computer,it's very general.Computer give pelple lots of fun.We canlisten musics,watch movies,draw pictuers ,write Emails,get lots of informations and do many many things on the computer or Internet.How convenience!But now,hacker always makes program broken,and then we can't use computer,we can't do lots of things!So I want a day of computer,to keep a lookout hacker and make our life more informationzation!
本人英语不好,
麻烦改一下.谢啦.
I want a day or computer.Because now,peopel always use computer,it's very general.Computer give pelple lots of fun.We canlisten musics,watch movies,draw pictuers ,write Emails,get lots of informations and do many many things on the computer or Internet.How convenience!But now,hacker always makes program broken,and then we can't use computer,we can't do lots of things!So I want a day of computer,to keep a lookout hacker and make our life more informationzation!
本人英语不好,
I want ．．．．because nowadays computers have been part of our life.Computer adds much color to our life.For example,we can listen musics,watch movies,draw pictures,send emails,get lots of informations and so on.While,nowadays,hackers always break computer programs,thus we can't use it and do many things.So i want(我不太明白你到底需要什么,你翻译的这个day of computer看不懂)．．后面你请教别人吧,当中我帮你该了点语法和优化了写作,参考下咯