作业帮麻烦英语好的大神帮我检查一下这里面有没有什么错误的语法之类的谢谢
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麻烦英语好的大神帮我检查一下这里面有没有什么错误的语法之类的谢谢
Hello.everybody.Today ,i will tell you a person i admire ----Hans Christian Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen was born in a small town of Denmark in 1805. Andersen's life was not easy. As a child he was highly dissociable .His father was a sickly man and his mother washed clothes for a living.Andersen was not only a fairy tale writer but a poet,a playwright and a traveler.And he was also good at paper cutting.He loves stories, plays, and the theater at a young age. These hobbies helped him become a famous writer.
He worked as a tailor, and then in a tobacco factory. At 14, he moved to Copenhagen to become a singer. However, after his voice changed, a director took him back to school.
Andersen wrote many fairy tales such as"The Emperor's New Clothes","The Little Mermaid","The Wild Swans","The Little Match-seller"and "The Ugly Duckling" .
I adore Andersen Because Andersen received little early education.But it was his devotion and dedication to literature .His fairy tales are very interesting and full of imaginations.
Hello.everybody.Today ,i will tell you a person i admire ----Hans Christian Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen was born in a small town of Denmark in 1805. Andersen's life was not easy. As a child he was highly dissociable .His father was a sickly man and his mother washed clothes for a living.Andersen was not only a fairy tale writer but a poet,a playwright and a traveler.And he was also good at paper cutting.He loves stories, plays, and the theater at a young age. These hobbies helped him become a famous writer.
He worked as a tailor, and then in a tobacco factory. At 14, he moved to Copenhagen to become a singer. However, after his voice changed, a director took him back to school.
Andersen wrote many fairy tales such as"The Emperor's New Clothes","The Little Mermaid","The Wild Swans","The Little Match-seller"and "The Ugly Duckling" .
I adore Andersen Because Andersen received little early education.But it was his devotion and dedication to literature .His fairy tales are very interesting and full of imaginations.
错误有点多，第一人称I用大写
时态有问题，前面用的一般过去时，后面出现了一般现在时（.He loves stories, plays, and the theater at a young age.）
Hans Christian Andersen was born in a small town named Denmark in 1805. Andersen had a extraordinary life . (不能用easy，
His father was a sick man 最好这样说His father was sick
时态有问题，前面用的一般过去时，后面出现了一般现在时（.He loves stories, plays, and the theater at a young age.）
Hans Christian Andersen was born in a small town named Denmark in 1805. Andersen had a extraordinary life . (不能用easy，
His father was a sick man 最好这样说His father was sick
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