英语好的进!I have finished reading the novel named The……..It told

英语好的进!
I have finished reading the novel named The……..It told an interesting story about a brave and clever boy named Huck.He and his friend called Jim escaped from the village where they didn’t live a happy life.They went to an island.And then they experienced a lot of matters .Finally they got the freedom which they used to dream of.
I really admire the little hero,Huck,who dared to try for the freedom for himself.Although he was very young,he didn’t be timid.After reading the novel,I asked myself whether I can be as brave as Huck or not if I am in trouble.The answer may have been NO in the past.However,it’s YES now.
After reading the novel,I also realize that if I am in trouble,the first thing that I should do is to calm down.When Huck got into trouble,he tried his best to calm down.Because of that,he could always solve the problem successfully.Of course I should learn from him and I am sure I will do everything better in the future.
Last but not least,I got a lot of happiness while I was reading this attractive novel.I always lost myself in it because the story was really wonderful!
In short,The….is a nice book.I’m sure you will love it if you finish reading it .
看看上文有没有错.The….表示一个书名请忽略.

I have finished reading the novel named The……. .It told an interesting story about a brave and clever boy named Huck. He and his friend [called][1]* Jim escaped from the village where they didn’t live a happy life. They went to an island. [And then they experienced a lot of matters .][2]*[Finally they got the freedom which they used to dream of. ]
I really admire the little hero, Huck, who dared to try for the freedom for himself. Although he was very young, [he didn’t be timid.][4]* After reading the novel, [I asked myself whether I can be as brave as Huck or not if I am in trouble. ][5]* The answer may have been NO in the past. However, it’s YES now.
After reading the novel, I also realize that if I am in trouble, the first thing that I should do is to calm down. When Huck got into trouble, he tried his best to calm down. [Because of that,][6]* he could always solve the [problem][7]* successfully. Of course I should learn from him and [I am][8]* sure I will do everything better in the future.
Last but not least, I got a lot of happiness while I was reading this attractive novel. I always lost myself in it because the story was really wonderful!
In short, The….is a nice book. [I’m sure you will love it if you finish reading it .][9]
写的很好 没什么语法错误,都挑不出来!
有一些地方可以润色一下：
[1]有点多余,可去掉.
[2]并没有语法错误,但是这样的表达更好一些：
After experiencing great hardships
[3]freedom所表达的“自由”是抽象的自由,比如言论自由出版自由等,或者说是“自由”这种概念,而[重获自由]的词组有一个固定用法[get free]
另外used to是过去式表示“过去常常”,但是本文叙述时态已经是过去时,所以此处应该用过去完成时.
Finally they got free, as what they had been dreamt of.
[4]此处改为：He wasn't timid. 或 He didn't show timid. 或 He never retreated.
[5]该省略的地方还是要省略的,否则不简洁
I asked myself whether I could be as brave as Huck when in trouble.
[6]改为：
[as a result] 或 [And that is the reason why]
[7]problems
[8]make更好
[9]I promise that you would fall in love with it after reading this book.