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高中英语作文dear editon :with the college entrance examation appro

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高中英语作文
dear editon :
with the college entrance examation approaching .More and More families use a way that cncourage their students to study hard with promising them a great of money,travaling and so on..but i don't suppose it all the students cup a tea ..as the time go by ,the pleasure of students will go up.
you know ,if the student do not have a good spirity in studying,how can they get good mark?maybe what the students really want is not a key to university.and this method may well result in the students who just look forward to acquiring the reward
.so they could lost the interest in studying.
last but not least .more care with heart for you child than to give them reward ..
let them konw :be youself today,and you will succeed tomorrow
并指正语法错误 与不当的地方 并按高考30记 我能得多少分。
Dear Editor:
With the college entrance examation approaching ,more and more families encourage their children to study hard by / through promising them a great sum of money,a trip and so on,but I don't think that interests them at all ..As time goes by ,the lure of that promise to the children will fade away / vanish.
As you know ,if the students do not have a good attitude towards study,how can they get good marks?Maybe what the students really want is not the key to a university.and the parents' promise may well result in their children's looking forward to gaining the reward
.so they could lose interest in studying.
Last but not least,what is really needed is to give more care than to give them a money-centered reward.
We students,or rather children ,must let them konw :be ourselves today,and we will succeed tomorrow !
Dear Editor,though I have myself said the above,it also truly reflects other students' opnions about their parents' promises.What do you think about our parents' promoses and our reactions to them?
我给你的作文评分是 11-12分.你的结尾几乎是零,根本没有.我为你添加了.