下面一段英文在写作上有什么错误,请一一指出

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下面一段英文在写作上有什么错误,请一一指出
I have heard that you can improve english by writing diary in english .I think I will write some articles when I have freetime for taking a record of what happened around me.You can comprehend me from these words,share the happy hour I have gone through,Ok,let's talk about what happened to me today.
I have work in a row for eight days,I 'm tired ,but I have get to know many documents what play an important part in our repair work.I have a great harvest in these days,If there is gain,there is also lost,this is the thing I'm lossing all the time,need I to be happy or not?I don't know.
I am convinced that I don't like the society which I have lived in.I want to get out of this planet.

i think i will 改为 i decide to (英语没人这么说的)
happy hour 改为 happy hours
i have work 改为 i had worked
那个干脆改为no pain,no gain好了
能力有限,就改这么多了,待他人补充!

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