作业帮短文改错 请菁菁草老师
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The important of the English English is important to us now. Around the world , everyone learns English . English is active language. So it make full use of around the world. We learn English language that in the work and communication. If we have a good command of English, we can learn scientific and culture. However, how to improve English spoken. First we don’t afraid of speaking. Everyone don’t laugh at you. In your free time, you should make conversations with your friends. And you can listen to the English tapes. For example English songs. These all can improve your English spoken. If you want to learn, and hold on it , you can learn it best. Believe yourself！ 老师辛苦了，我是小张好久没写了。 给出分数
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The important of the English English is important to us now. Around the world , everyone learns English . English is active language. So it make full use of around the world. We learn English language that in the work and communication. If we have a good command of English, we can learn scientific and culture. However, how to improve English spoken. First we don’t afraid of speaking. Everyone don’t laugh at you. In your free time, you should make conversations with your friends. And you can listen to the English tapes. For example English songs. These all can improve your English spoken. If you want to learn, and hold on it , you can learn it best. Believe yourself！ 1、 应该改为名词：importance 2、 这里在语言前加an 3、 应该用被动语态：is made 4、 这里语言不通顺，可以改为to help us 5、 改为knowledge 6、 用名词：science 7、 口语是spoken English 8、 改为don’t be 9、 改为such as 10、 同7 11、 去掉and。 12、 小张确实很久没写了吧？你可是欠缺大量的练习啊！错误比较多。体现出语言的感觉不太好。而且标题和内容不太一致。给分11分。加油！ 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
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The important of the English English is important to us now. Around the world , everyone learns English . English is active language. So it make full use of around the world. We learn English language that in the work and communication. If we have a good command of English, we can learn scientific and culture. However, how to improve English spoken. First we don’t afraid of speaking. Everyone don’t laugh at you. In your free time, you should make conversations with your friends. And you can listen to the English tapes. For example English songs. These all can improve your English spoken. If you want to learn, and hold on it , you can learn it best. Believe yourself！ 1、 应该改为名词：importance 2、 这里在语言前加an 3、 应该用被动语态：is made 4、 这里语言不通顺，可以改为to help us 5、 改为knowledge 6、 用名词：science 7、 口语是spoken English 8、 改为don’t be 9、 改为such as 10、 同7 11、 去掉and。 12、 小张确实很久没写了吧？你可是欠缺大量的练习啊！错误比较多。体现出语言的感觉不太好。而且标题和内容不太一致。给分11分。加油！ 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略