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老师您好~ 这是我写的一篇作文，请您帮我批改。谢谢您！~ A park in beijing
Zi zhu park is a famous park in Beijing .It located in west of Haidian district.It is famous for bamboos.There are many different kinds of bamboos in the park,they looks beautiful and full of interesting.In autumn,there always are many strage flowers that come from America and England.They make the park more beautiful.The greatset place to visit is the lake in the park .You can see some bosts on the lake and the children are boating .In winter ,the weather become cold,many people skat on the lake and they are enjoy ice.I wolk across the park ,I can see the nature view,Ican hear the nature’s song .Ifeel comfortabla and relaxing .It’s a really good place to have fun.
Zi zhu park is a famous park in Beijing .It located in west of Haidian district.It is famous for bamboos.There are many different kinds of bamboos in the park,they looks beautiful and full of interesting.In autumn,there always are many strage flowers that come from America and England.They make the park more beautiful.The greatset place to visit is the lake in the park .You can see some bosts on the lake and the children are boating .In winter ,the weather become cold,many people skat on the lake and they are enjoy ice.I wolk across the park ,I can see the nature view,Ican hear the nature’s song .Ifeel comfortabla and relaxing .It’s a really good place to have fun.
解题思路： 语言流畅,写的很有条理.内容也很丰富. 注意地名的书写形式.和个别词的正确拼写.
解题过程：
A park in Beijing
Zi Zhu Park is a famous park in Beijing .It is located in west of Haidian District.It is famous for bamboos.
There are many different kinds of bamboos in the park,they looks(s去掉) beautiful and full of interesting.In autumn,there always are many strange flowers that come from
America and England.They make the park more beautiful.The greatest place to visit is the lake in the
park .You can see some boats on the lake and the children are boating .In winter ,the weather becomes
cold,many people skate on the lake and they (are去掉) enjoy ice.I walk across the park ,I can see the natural beauty ,I can hear the nature’s song .I feel comfortable and relaxing .It’s a really good place to have fun.
语言流畅,写的很有条理.内容也很丰富.
注意地名的书写形式.和个别词的正确拼写.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
A park in Beijing
Zi Zhu Park is a famous park in Beijing .It is located in west of Haidian District.It is famous for bamboos.
There are many different kinds of bamboos in the park,they looks(s去掉) beautiful and full of interesting.In autumn,there always are many strange flowers that come from
America and England.They make the park more beautiful.The greatest place to visit is the lake in the
park .You can see some boats on the lake and the children are boating .In winter ,the weather becomes
cold,many people skate on the lake and they (are去掉) enjoy ice.I walk across the park ,I can see the natural beauty ,I can hear the nature’s song .I feel comfortable and relaxing .It’s a really good place to have fun.
语言流畅,写的很有条理.内容也很丰富.
注意地名的书写形式.和个别词的正确拼写.
最终答案：略