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请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。

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请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
注意:①无须写标题; ②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

本文是篇英语材料作文,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必需认真审题,首先要注意文章是要求结合具体的事例,所以一般都是发生过的,故描述是要用一般过去时。既然是具体事例来理解,因此最好用第一人称。再有就是写的事例内容一定要符合所给的主题,并形成文章主题的首尾呼应从而提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鲜明概括并亮出了作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定语从句which drove off quickly都为文章增色不少,一些短语和短句的使用也恰到好处比如knock down,drive off,be proud of, rush to sb to do sth,compare with等并注意了句子的衔接如: when, luckily 等等。