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英语高手能帮我修改文章吗?
What are you going to do when you grow up?Different people will have different answer.Some wants to be an actor or actress;some wants to be a doctor or nurse; others want to be a singer .As for me,I want to be a teacher in a primary school.
The reason is very simple—I love children,they are naive and kind,and I want to help them study better.However,it’s not easy to be a good teacher.So now,I’m going to study hard to get more and more knowledges.And I’m going to syudy psychology by myself because I want to communicate better with my students.I know,to be a good teacher I should do lots of things.So now I suddenly found that I’m not only a teacher but also a learner.I believe I’ll be a good teacher if I do my best to be though I know it’s hard.Hope my dream will come true!
别改动太大.
What are you going to do when you grow up?Different people will have different answer.Some wants to be an actor or actress;some wants to be a doctor or nurse; others want to be a singer .As for me,I want to be a teacher in a primary school.
The reason is very simple—I love children,they are naive and kind,and I want to help them study better.However,it’s not easy to be a good teacher.So now,I’m going to study hard to get more and more knowledges.And I’m going to syudy psychology by myself because I want to communicate better with my students.I know,to be a good teacher I should do lots of things.So now I suddenly found that I’m not only a teacher but also a learner.I believe I’ll be a good teacher if I do my best to be though I know it’s hard.Hope my dream will come true!
别改动太大.
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