Ｍy perfect holiday

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老师让写一篇８０－１００字关于完美假期的文章！！请老师帮忙改改，再添加点内容！！谢谢！！！！ My perfect holiday I went to Hangzhou in the last year .There is a beautiful city.It is famous for Hangzhou lake .I was very exciting when I saw the lake at first.I went to there is summer ,In the lake have 荷花and a lot of fishes, but I went to there it`s rainy, the view was very romantic .I taked a lot of photos. Hangzhou food is very good,there are lots of my favourite food so I eat lots of it .

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My perfect holiday I went to Hangzhou in the last year .There（改为That） is a beautiful city.It is famous for Hangzhou lake .I was very exciting when I saw the lake at first.I went to （去掉to因为there 是一个副词，前面不能加to.） there is (改为in ) summer ,In the lake（改为Hangzhou lake ） have （改为has因这主语是单数，并且是现存的一种状况。）荷花（lotus）and a lot of fishes, but(去掉), when(加上) I went to （去掉，理由同上。）there it`s （改为it was 因为前面的时间状语是一般过去时。）rainy, the view was very romantic .I taked a lot of photos.
Hangzhou food is very good,there are（改为is 因为后面的food是不可数名词。） lots of my favourite food so I eat（改为ate因为是在去的时候吃的，是过去时。） lots of it .
I think Hangzhou lake is the most beautiful place in the world.
It makes us happy.
最终答案：略

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