英文作文改错
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Dear Mr Smith I am Li hua, chairman of the student union, from Chengwan High School , I have arranged one day for you at 26th June. In the morning ,our school will hold a forum ,our students will discuss about the life in the school and the difference of culture with you. We can discover our mistakes and correct them. Next we will cook the dumpling and doodles for you especially. You can taste the most delicious Chinese food. In the afternoon, you will visit the Haihe River with our students. It’s a good place to visit because of beautiful view. Are you satisfied with my plan. If you have some suggestion, you can write to me. I wait for you arrival. Yours sincerely Li Hua 老师谢谢 25分 能得多少分
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Dear Mr Smith I am Li hua, chairman of the student union, from Chengwan High School , I have arranged one day for you at 26th June. In the morning ,our school will hold a forum ,our students will discuss about the life in the school and the difference of culture(最好改为different cultures) with you. We can discover our mistakes and correct them. Next we will cook the dumpling(最好改为直接用复数,和后面的对应) and doodles(noodles) for you especially(改为specially for you,specially专门). You can taste the most delicious Chinese food. In the afternoon, you will visit the Haihe River with our students(改为us). It’s a good place to visit because of its beautiful view. Are you satisfied with my plan?If you have any suggestion, you can write to me. I am waiting for you arrival. Yours sincerely Li Hua
17分
最终答案:略
解题过程:
Dear Mr Smith I am Li hua, chairman of the student union, from Chengwan High School , I have arranged one day for you at 26th June. In the morning ,our school will hold a forum ,our students will discuss about the life in the school and the difference of culture(最好改为different cultures) with you. We can discover our mistakes and correct them. Next we will cook the dumpling(最好改为直接用复数,和后面的对应) and doodles(noodles) for you especially(改为specially for you,specially专门). You can taste the most delicious Chinese food. In the afternoon, you will visit the Haihe River with our students(改为us). It’s a good place to visit because of its beautiful view. Are you satisfied with my plan?If you have any suggestion, you can write to me. I am waiting for you arrival. Yours sincerely Li Hua
17分
最终答案:略