作业帮我写了一篇英语作文,My View on FriendsReal friends share the same idea
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我写了一篇英语作文,
My View on Friends
Real friends share the same ideals and interests.My friends are very kind.We help each other and advance together.If I make a mistake,my friend will not hesitate to point it out for me.We often play basketball outside.My friend is good at English,but I am poor in it.When I had difficulties,my friend can help me.So my English had improved a lot.I think keep friendship is very necessary.I like my friends.
My View on Friends
Real friends share the same ideals and interests.My friends are very kind.We help each other and advance together.If I make a mistake,my friend will not hesitate to point it out for me.We often play basketball outside.My friend is good at English,but I am poor in it.When I had difficulties,my friend can help me.So my English had improved a lot.I think keep friendship is very necessary.I like my friends.
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Real friends share （the same 删掉,既然share,说明不一样,分享）ideals and interests.My friends are very kind.We help each other and make progress (advance 删掉,不好）together.If I make a mistake,they （my friend 重复） will not hesitate to point it out for me.We often play basketball together(outside 不必点明室外,没有意义）.One of my friends （前面friends是复数,这里应点明是一个朋友）is good at English,but I am poor at (固定搭配,不用in)it.With her help,(When I had difficulties,my friend can help me.So 罗嗦,删去)my English has （had 不要,不用过去完成时）improved a lot.I think maintaining (keep 不好,而且作主语要用ing形式）friendship is very necessary.I like my friends.
Real friends share （the same 删掉,既然share,说明不一样,分享）ideals and interests.My friends are very kind.We help each other and make progress (advance 删掉,不好）together.If I make a mistake,they （my friend 重复） will not hesitate to point it out for me.We often play basketball together(outside 不必点明室外,没有意义）.One of my friends （前面friends是复数,这里应点明是一个朋友）is good at English,but I am poor at (固定搭配,不用in)it.With her help,(When I had difficulties,my friend can help me.So 罗嗦,删去)my English has （had 不要,不用过去完成时）improved a lot.I think maintaining (keep 不好,而且作主语要用ing形式）friendship is very necessary.I like my friends.
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