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麻烦帮我修改作文,不要改变原文意思!
Recently, our city is developing three creative activities, to create civilized city should start from me, from small start, as middle school students, we should be how to improve our image of the city?
I think we can do this: first of all to be polite, no spitting, no littering rubbish, protect side environment; Because life is very important so we will abide by the traffic rules, and to keep public order, do a civilized men; Second, we should learn knowledge, especially English, so can volunteer, make the tourists from all over the world come to us here to feel more at home.
The classmates, come on! Believe in our actions our city will be more beautiful!
Recently, our city is developing three creative activities, to create civilized city should start from me, from small start, as middle school students, we should be how to improve our image of the city?
I think we can do this: first of all to be polite, no spitting, no littering rubbish, protect side environment; Because life is very important so we will abide by the traffic rules, and to keep public order, do a civilized men; Second, we should learn knowledge, especially English, so can volunteer, make the tourists from all over the world come to us here to feel more at home.
The classmates, come on! Believe in our actions our city will be more beautiful!
In recent years,the our city develops three creative activities,to create a civilized city should begin from me,start from the trivial,as middle school students,we should be how to improve the image of our city?
I think we can do :first of all,be polite,do not spit everywhere,does not throw trash,protect environment; because life is very important,so we should obey the traffic rules,and to comply with the public order,to be a civilized; secondly,we should learn knowledge,especially in English,let visitors from all over the world come to us here feel more at home.
The classmates,gas!I believe that our actions,our city more beautiful!
意思是一样的
但是你的文章不像是英语文章像是直译过来的~
英国人可能会读不懂的!
我帮你修改了一下你看看吧
I think we can do :first of all,be polite,do not spit everywhere,does not throw trash,protect environment; because life is very important,so we should obey the traffic rules,and to comply with the public order,to be a civilized; secondly,we should learn knowledge,especially in English,let visitors from all over the world come to us here feel more at home.
The classmates,gas!I believe that our actions,our city more beautiful!
意思是一样的
但是你的文章不像是英语文章像是直译过来的~
英国人可能会读不懂的!
我帮你修改了一下你看看吧