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帮我看看这段话写的怎么样.

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帮我看看这段话写的怎么样.
Dear All:
I am proud of joining in this team and I wish to make my dedication to XXX.
Feeling appreciated for your helps and advices.Especially thank Tom for all your assistance.
Best regards
Dear All:
I am proud of joining in this team and I wish to make my dedication to XXX.
Appreciated for your helps and advices.Especially thank Tom for all your assistance.
Best regards
Feeling appreciated for your helps and advices.
这句感觉有点问题.要么是i feel ...要么是后面要跟句话的.不能单独这样一句话的吧.
恩改过了就对了.挺好的了~