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根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文描述一次野外生存训练并谈谈自己飞感受
时间
活动
感受
8月8日到10日 1. 携带物品：指南针、帐篷、手电筒、地图、急救包、火柴、食品、衣物等。 2. 途中翻过三座山，有过两条河。在穿越森林时迷了路，靠指南针找到了正确的方向。 3. 在营地，支起帐篷，自己生火做饭。 4. 学习紧急救护。
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我对纯中文信息的英语作文不太会写，请老师指导。这类作文怎样写能得高分。请老师详细指导这类作文的解题思路、过程。
解题思路： 学习如何写记叙文: 记叙文主要是记述所发生的事情和经历.常见的形式有:故事,传记,游记,日记,新闻报道等. 记叙文的写作要素: 1. 要交代清楚五要素的内容即:where, when, what, who, how. 2. 事件可按时间或空间顺序叙述. 3. 时态通常是与过去有关的时态.(如果是当前的经常性事件,自然,社会现象.通常用与现在有关的时态.) 记叙文的篇章结构: 开头the beginning---交代必要的背景,如:时间,地点,人物等. 中间the middle------交代故事情节(事情的主体).如:事件的发生,发展和前因后果 结尾the ending------事情的结果或感想,愿望等(the result or feeling)
解题过程：
以下范文，仅供参考：
My classmates and I took part in a wildness survival program from August 8th to August 10th this summer.
Before we started, we were equipped with a compass, a map, a first-aid kit, tents, flashlights, some food, some clothes and so on. On the way we climbed three hills and swam across two rivers. We lost our way in the forest. Luckily we found the right direction with the compass. As soon as we arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking. We also learned how to five first-aid.
Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gained in class to solve problems. It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
以下范文，仅供参考：
My classmates and I took part in a wildness survival program from August 8th to August 10th this summer.
Before we started, we were equipped with a compass, a map, a first-aid kit, tents, flashlights, some food, some clothes and so on. On the way we climbed three hills and swam across two rivers. We lost our way in the forest. Luckily we found the right direction with the compass. As soon as we arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking. We also learned how to five first-aid.
Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gained in class to solve problems. It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.
最终答案：略