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Dear Sir:
I am writing toask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a teacher on Chinese study.
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested of Chinese cultures.My teaching plan will be as follows.First,I
will teach him some common vocabulary used in daily conversation.In addition,
some easy written words are also the vital part of the teaching job.
I hope you can realize my wish my wish to contribute a little in both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture.If you find a proper candidate,please contact me.I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li
Dear Sir:
I am writing toask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a teacher on Chinese study.
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested of Chinese cultures.My teaching plan will be as follows.First,I
will teach him some common vocabulary used in daily conversation.In addition,
some easy written words are also the vital part of the teaching job.
I hope you can realize my wish my wish to contribute a little in both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture.If you find a proper candidate,please contact me.I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a teacher on Chinese study.
【评点】a teacher on Chinese study (在汉语学习方面的老师) 语法上没错,但是语义有些问题,另外 teacher 不如 tutor 较为妥帖,改为 a tutor to help him/her with his/her Chinese study（帮助他/她学习汉语的老师）..
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested of Chinese cultures.
【评点】is interested in 而不是 is interested of
My teaching plan will be as follows.
【评点】句号改为冒号
In addition, some easy written words are also the vital part of the teaching job.
【评点】easy written words 语意模糊,改为high frequency word in writing
I hope you can realize my wish my wish to contribute a little in both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture.
【评点】my wish 重复,删去一个；promoting 含宣传的意思,不如用 popularizing
I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
【评点】用 take to read（喜欢/沉湎于读）不妥.把这look forward to 和appreciate 的顺序调整一下改为：I look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate hearing from you soon（翘望您读过这封信并恭候早日收到佳音）.
全文修改如下（括号中是修改部分）
Dear Sir:
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a tutor (to help him/her with his/her Chinese study). I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested (in) Chinese cultures. My teaching plan will be as follows: First, I will teach him some common vocabulary used in daily conversation. In addition, some (high frequency words) in writing are also the vital part of the teaching job. I hope you can realize my wish to contribute a little in both (popularizing) Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture. If you find a proper candidate, please contact me. I (look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate) hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li
【评点】a teacher on Chinese study (在汉语学习方面的老师) 语法上没错,但是语义有些问题,另外 teacher 不如 tutor 较为妥帖,改为 a tutor to help him/her with his/her Chinese study（帮助他/她学习汉语的老师）..
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested of Chinese cultures.
【评点】is interested in 而不是 is interested of
My teaching plan will be as follows.
【评点】句号改为冒号
In addition, some easy written words are also the vital part of the teaching job.
【评点】easy written words 语意模糊,改为high frequency word in writing
I hope you can realize my wish my wish to contribute a little in both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture.
【评点】my wish 重复,删去一个；promoting 含宣传的意思,不如用 popularizing
I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
【评点】用 take to read（喜欢/沉湎于读）不妥.把这look forward to 和appreciate 的顺序调整一下改为：I look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate hearing from you soon（翘望您读过这封信并恭候早日收到佳音）.
全文修改如下（括号中是修改部分）
Dear Sir:
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a tutor (to help him/her with his/her Chinese study). I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested (in) Chinese cultures. My teaching plan will be as follows: First, I will teach him some common vocabulary used in daily conversation. In addition, some (high frequency words) in writing are also the vital part of the teaching job. I hope you can realize my wish to contribute a little in both (popularizing) Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture. If you find a proper candidate, please contact me. I (look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate) hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li