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高中改错(9处)After supper yesterday evening ,I asked by my friend

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高中改错(9处)
After supper yesterday evening ,I asked by my friend
Mary to go and see a movie with her .On our ways to the cinema
we saw a little girl sitting by the roadside crying .We bought
her a cake to shop her cried .But when we asked
where she lived in ,she siad that she had no idea .So
they took her to the police station and asked the police to
take care of her .After that we went to cinema .But when
we arrived there ,the movie was near at its end .We
missed the movie ,and we did a good deed.
How happily we felt!
After supper yesterday evening ,I asked by my friend (1 asked -> was asked )
Mary to go and see a movie with her .On our ways to the cinema (2 ways -> way)
we saw a little girl sitting by the roadside crying .We bought
her a cake to shop her cried .But when we asked ( 3 shop her cried -> stop her crying )
where she lived in ,she siad that she had no idea .So (4 lived in-> lived )
they took her to the police station and asked the police to (5 they -> we)
take care of her .After that we went to cinema .But when (6 cinema -> the cinema)
we arrived there ,the movie was near at its end .We (7near-> nearly)
missed the movie ,and we did a good deed.(8 and -> but )
How happily we felt!( 9 happily -> happy )