英语翻译said i love you ...but i liedYou are the candle love is

英语翻译
said i love you ...but i lied
You are the candle love is the flame
A fire that burns through windand rain
Shine you light on this heart of mine Till the end of time
You came to me Like the dawn through the night
Just shining like the sun
Out of my dreams and into my life
You are the one You are the one
Said I love you but I lied
Cause this is more than love I feel inside
Said I love you but I was wrong
Cause love could never never feel so strong
Said I love you but I lied
With all my soul I ve tried in vainhow can the words my heart explain
This taste of heaven so deep sotrue I’ve found in you
So many reasons in so many ways
M y life has just begun
Need you forever I need you to stay
You are the one You are the one
Said I love you but I lied
Cause this is more than love I feel inside
Said I love you but I was wrong
Cause love could never never feel so strong
Said I love you but I lied
以下是我翻译的了：
说过我爱你,但我说了谎
你是蜡烛,爱是火焰
火焰在风雨中燃烧
在我心中照耀着你,知道时间结束
你像黎明穿过夜晚一样来到我身边
就像光亮的太阳一样
走出我的梦境,进入我的生活
你就是那个人,你就是唯一
说过我爱你,但我说了谎
因为我说不出心里有多爱你
说过我爱你,但我错了
因为我从未感觉过如此强烈的爱
说过我爱你,但我说了谎
我所常识的都是徒劳
一个词怎能说明我的内心?
这种天堂般的感觉太深刻了
我已经找到了
爱有太多的理由,太多的方式
我的生活刚刚开始
我需要你留下,与我在一起,永远
你就是那个人,你就是唯一的
说过我爱你,但是我说了谎
因为我有说不出的爱你
说过我爱你,但我错了
因为我从未感觉过如此强大的爱
说过我爱你,但我说了谎
就是这样了,请大家批评我,给我提意见,

第一句要加have
心中照耀着你,知道时间结束 这一句应该是In my heart shine upon you, know the time is over 你那句意思是照你的灯照在心中,我直到生命的尽头
came to me Like the dawn through the night 这一句是不对的 意思和 黎明穿过夜晚一样来到我身边 完全不一样了啊 倒一下就差不多了
Just shining like the sun 这里的just 是刚刚的意思,整句话就成了只是明亮像太阳
走出我的梦境,进入我的生活 这一句个人觉得in好一点 当然into也可以
你就是那个人,你就是唯一 这句的话感觉You are the people, you are the only 这样会好很多
因为我说不出心里有多爱你 这一句感觉你翻译的复杂化 其实只要说Because I don't have a heart of love you就可以了,你那一句的意思已经完全变了
Cause love could never never feel so strong 你这一句意思有点不通啊 顺序也错了 正解大概是这样的Because I had never felt so strong love
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翻译一段正确的给你

Said love you, but I have lied
You are a candle, love is a fire
The flame burning in the wind and rain
In my heart shine upon you, know the time is over
You like the dawn through the night as came to my side
Like light sun
Out of my dreams and in my life
You are the people, you are the only
Said love you, but I have lied
Because I don't have a heart of love you
Said I love you, but I was wrong
Because I had never felt so strong love
Said love you, but I have lied
What I sense is in vain
How can a word that my heart?
This feeling like heaven too impressive
I have found the
Love have too much reason, the way too much
My life has just started
I need you to leave, and ?
This feeling like heaven too impressive
I have found the
Love have too much reason, the way too much
My life has just started
I need you to leave, and I together, always
You are the people, you are the only one
Said I love you, but I have lied
Because I have say a love you
Said I love you, but I was wrong
Because I have never felt that such a powerful love
Said I love you, but I have lied
就这样了,并不敢确定是百分百优秀,但是百分百正确的,有些地方没有给你指出来,就自己领悟吧,你已经不错了,加油哦